I consider this a smiling poem, Pinocchio is a funny name, so he enlightens the whole poem's mood. A nice ysis, still, I expect you to start thinking about the Collab. A title, a theme we should think of. How about a fisherman who goes to his work, on his boat, or a holy woman in a monastery? I like those two. Thank you for submitting, you are always exactly the opposite of Pinocchio. Bravo... OK! I agree..
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